Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace thier functions. Do you agree or disagree?
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matter, a recent act has been added, named MUMS, an abbreviation for Minor Use/Minor Species to FFDCA. Linking Words
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act was lately appended to move the process of introducing a drug into the marketplace. It is confined to those conditional drugs for major species and states, in short, that Linking Words
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tried drug is to be used in a minor way. The number of animal patients must not exceed 50,000, 70,000, and 120,000 for horses, dogs, and cats, respectively.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite