Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, Individuals think that the key issue of the environment is the annihilation of

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others opine that humidity and population have more effect on the habitat. Both perspectives will be discussed , but I think that

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and population have a drastic effect on the environment.

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, the annihilation of plants and wildlife should not be ignored. On one hand, the extinction of animals and

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can not be easily dismissed because it will affect the ecosystem of life and affect the food supply of human beings.

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, imagine if there is a loss of bees in the wildlife, it would not only affect the trees that depend on the bees for nutrients. It would

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stop the supply of honey to mankind.

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, many communities affirm that deforestation and industrialisation are the causes for the disappearance of

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around the globe. They believe that mankind should stop deforestation and industrialisation because they have the moral responsibility to protect other

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from harm or danger , but since human ambition for industrialisation is greater, the annihilation of some

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is imminent.

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change and

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are opine by most communities to be key issues of the earth today. Many people think that the over-reliance on fossil fuels ,

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as petroleum, has a negative brunt on the

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of the world. The release of toxic gases into the air causes air infection, will has a negative influence on the respiratory organs of humans , thereby creating diseases

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as cancer.

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, A study from Lincoln University shows that 65% of lung cancer cases are caused by air

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.

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, with the constant disposal of waste into the sea by companies, many sea levels will drop , thereby reducing the supply of rain to the community . It can

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have a negative impact on the health and lifestyle of people. To illustrate

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, research conducted in 2001 showed the positive effects of

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on mankind and their lifestyle.

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research illustrated that 90% human needs are dependent on the supply of

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. Without

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, there will be starvation and hunger on Earth. It

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showed the importance of

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and why

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pollution

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is a key issue for humans

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In conclusion, both views are important issues to nature, but I reaffirm that humidity and

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have a serious impact on the world's habitat today.

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, the extinction of animals and

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should not be ignored . I will

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recommend that the government adopt rules and regulations that prevent infection,

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change and

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the disappearance

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of

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