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the Grenby
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the Grenby
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park
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about
the daily visitation in one Punctuation problem
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the x-axis
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seperated
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separated
in
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into
and
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in
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on
y-axis
the visitation number is noted.
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population
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visitors
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the history
museum
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less
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fewer
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then
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slightly
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increasing
fall down
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museum
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start
with about 290 people on Monday, the following three days Correct subject-verb agreement
starts
droped
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dropped
which
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from Thursday to Linking Words
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visitors
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at the end
of Saturday at 400 people. Linking Words
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week
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visitors
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apply
fall
back to 350.
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fell
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, the Linking Words
amusement
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park
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on
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with
the
similar Correct article usage
a
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population
like
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as
museum
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with
about 300 individuals. Punctuation problem
, with
Thuesday
to Wednesday, it increased slightly to 350 and Correct your spelling
Tuesday
fall
back to the value of Monday. Wrong verb form
fell
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at
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Museum
the linear rose started in the Correct article usage
the Museum
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park
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week
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in
Saturday with the Change preposition
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amount
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number
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