In the past, knowlege was contained in books. Nowadays, knowlege is uploded to the internet. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that these days most of
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from books to online
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. But is that for the greater good
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, the internet gives us a wide access to multiple large banks of knowlege in every topic often up to date, it gives you many kinds of
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, text, video and audio to aid learning it connects people around the world and lets ideas spread quickly,
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in can be much cheaper than buying regular books or it can be even free.
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, some data can be false or misleading
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propaganda or fake news. The main drawback of development is that
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on the Internet is not reliable every time. Because these details can be edited by anyone at any moment, they could be different each time we check.
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, Wikipedia, from which basic details can be gained
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is modifiable
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everyone can add their own
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may or may not be true and
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questionable.
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despite the negatives listed above
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a more
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can be accessed by anyone
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. In conclusion,
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the possible disadvantages of online learning,
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consider it to be a positive development
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because of easy and affordable access.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • access information
  • find facts
  • read books
  • read online
  • fast access to facts
  • up to date information
  • many sources
  • different formats
  • global view
  • save money
  • easy to use
  • wrong facts
  • fake news
  • too much information
  • check facts
  • good sources
  • not all can get online
  • read on screen
  • eye tired
  • privacy problems
  • deep reading
  • memory
  • critical thinking
  • balance
  • combine books and internet
  • teach digital skills
  • cite sources
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