The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption ofenergy in the USA since 1980 with projections untl 2030

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption ofenergy in the USA since 1980 with projections untl 2030
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption ofenergy in the USA since 1980 with projections untl 2030
The line graph illustrates
energy
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consumption
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in the United States between 1980 and 2030 ,based on a 2008 report .The values are given in quadrillion units.
Overall
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,
petrol
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and
oil
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, coal, and natural
gas
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are the main sources of
energy
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throughout the period,
while
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renewable
energy
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sources
such
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as nuclear, solar/wind,
andhydropower
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and hydropower
experience slower growth. In 1980,
petrol
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and
oil
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were the highest
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consumption
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in consumption
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, with
consumption
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at 35 quadrillion units .Natural
gas
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was the next most consumed, at 20q,
while
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coal represented just
above15q
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above 15q
.Between 1980 and 2015, the
consumption
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of these three
energy
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types fluctuated, with some years showing significant changes. After 2015, the use of
petrol
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and
oil
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,
as well as
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coal, saw a noticeable increase,
whereas
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the
consumption
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of natural
gas
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remained largely unchanged. By 2030, it is projected that
petrol
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and
oil
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will reach around 50q,almost twice the amount of natural
gas
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consumption
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(25q) and higher than coal at 30q.
In contrast
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, the growth of nuclear, solar wind, and hydropower
consumption
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remained relatively steady throughout most of the period. These renewable
energy
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sources were similar in 1980, each at about 4q. By 2030, nuclear power is forecast to rise to 7q, slightly surpassing solar/wind at 6q,
while
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hydropower is expected to remain at 4q.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, consumption, petrol, oil, gas, q with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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