The graph below shows in formation about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows in formation about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows in formation about the languages that 13-year-old students in one school chose to study. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below displays statistics about the French and
Mandarin
Use synonyms
languages that
pupils
Use synonyms
who are 13 years old chose to learn in England from 2000 to now. Unita measurements in students.
Overall
Linking Words
, choosing
Mandarin
Use synonyms
language
Use synonyms
increased dramatically among the
pupils
Use synonyms
throughout the period.
While
Linking Words
French
language
Use synonyms
decreased significantly over the entire period. In 2000, the
Mandarin
Use synonyms
language
Use synonyms
jumped sharply, from around 20 students to under 80 students in 2005,
then
Linking Words
started to fluctuate over the period till now , with nearly the same amount in 2005. Meanwhile, the French
language
Use synonyms
dropped considerably in 2005, from approximately 150
pupils
Use synonyms
to almost 90
pupils
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
2005, before it remained stable over the years. A higher number of
pupils
Use synonyms
who
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
chose French to study
was
Verb problem
apply
show examples
in 2000, and still the top selected
language
Use synonyms
over time ;
by contrast
Linking Words
, the lowest figure was for
Mandarin
Use synonyms
language
Use synonyms
selection,
Linking Words
however
Correct word choice
although
show examples
,
Punctuation problem
apply
show examples
it is still the least chosen
language
Use synonyms
over the years.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words mandarin, pupils, language with synonyms.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: