The maps below show changes that have taken place at a zoo inAustralia between 1960 and now.

The maps illustrate the major changes that occurred in an Australian

zoo

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from 1960 to the present.

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, the

zoo

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has shifted from a simple layout focused mainly on displaying

animals

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to a modern facility with enhanced attractions, infrastructure, and visitor convenience. In 1960, the Australian and African animal areas were located in the southwest,

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the northeast section contained birds, chimpanzees, a seal show, and a picnic area. The gift shop was situated in the south. The arrangement was relatively basic, with separated animal zones and limited visitor facilities. Currently, several developments have transformed the

zoo

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. A new wild

animals

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section has been added in the west, and the African

animals

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have been moved

further

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east. The chimpanzee enclosure has been replaced by a cable car, which connects key parts of the

zoo

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. The seal show has been relocated nearer to the African

animals

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while

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the picnic area in the northeast remains unchanged.

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, a ferry service has been introduced at the harbour, and the gift shop has been upgraded to serve more visitors.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words zoo, animals with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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175 words

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The maps below show changes that have taken place at a zoo inAustralia between 1960 and now.

All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but other think having a range of subject is better for a children's future.

Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays many job seekers are finding jobs that force them to move for from their family and friends. Is it a positive or a negative trend? What can be done about it?