1.You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

Dear teacher, My name is jas and
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am
mother
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the mother
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of
shinouske
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Shinouske
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, who is
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a student
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of
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in
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3rd
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the 3rd
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class. I am writing
this
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letter to get information regarding recent
trip
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of my
son class
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son's recent trip
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that
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was orgnized
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orgnized
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organised
by
school
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the school
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. First of all ,
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I
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would be grateful
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apply
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if you could provide me
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with details
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of
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the trip
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trip
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trip's
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exact date, time and location, because
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it's
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really important to know about general inquiries to prepare his
trip
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properly, so he can not face any problem during
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journey.
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,
shinouske
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Shinouske
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has
allergy
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an allergy
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from
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to
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mashrooms
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mushrooms
, please avoid any kind of
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mushroom
in his food,
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he is taking some medicine three times a day for
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problem
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will pack all that in his bag
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. Kindly
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remind him to take that medicine on time. I hope
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trip
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will be wonderful for all students
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plaese
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please
do not
hestiate
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hesitate
to contact me for any other information. I am looking for your response.
Your Sincerely
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Yours sincerely
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, Jas

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structure
Try to use one idea per paragraph and say only what is asked.
tone
Begin with a clear greeting and end with a neat closing.
grammar
Keep sentences short and check words like mushroom, date and time.
tone
Keep a calm and polite tone in the whole note.
content
The letter shows what you want to know about the trip.
safety
It asks about allergy and medicine to keep the child safe.
tone
The tone is polite and kind.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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