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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s health and capacity on work?

Colour
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people
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’s lives always existed
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 psychologists have known that
colour
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 can affect human feelings.
In
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 my perspective, it is not as crucial
like
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as
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 others
thinking
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,
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therefore
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, these schemes for decorating places
by
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 diverse colours might harm
people
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's lives. As a matter of fact,
rely
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 on
science
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 logic, no one cares about colours
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 they are focusing on their work. As far as
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 concerned,
colour
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 might break their thinking flow, the hilarious
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 of concentration,
this
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 leads to
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decreased
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 productivity in the workplace
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. Surprisingly
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, the fact of keeping the raw
colour
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 of objects can show
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people
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people's
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 attitude purely.
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, the
colour
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 in hospitals should be white,
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that
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which
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 is the basic
colour
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 to help
people
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 calm down and
wind up
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unwind
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, especially patients. Regarding the statement, the diversities or intensities of
colour
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 should not exist in solemn places.
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, hospitals require sanitary environments
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therefore
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, bright and pure
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colour
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colours
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 help to showcase the
non-bacteria
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 spaces.
Furthermore
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, the formal demands in these places
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hospitals
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hospitals,
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 are vital
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 it is inevitable that the basics in
colour
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 are
also
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 required,
on the other hand
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,
can
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which can
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 show the professionalism of the workers.
To conclude
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it
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apply
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, there is
the
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a
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 link between
colour
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 and
attitude
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the attitude
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 of
people
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including
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, including
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 customers and workers. The more professional, the more
minimize
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the environments's
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environments's
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environment's
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colour
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.

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planning
Plan a clear view: say your main point at the start, then give 2 or 3 reasons and a short end.
coherence
Use simple links to join ideas between sentences and paragraphs.
grammar
Check grammar and use short, simple sentences. Avoid long run-on lines.
idea
Some ideas link colour to mood and effect.
tone
The writing uses plain and easy words.
example
There is an example about hospital colour.

Your opinion

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