Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

Nowadays, most nations are facing some problems of environment.

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essay examines the reasons for environmental damage and suggests ways to tackle them. More

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issue. To illustrate, many factories

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waste into water and

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fish and

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ecosystems. Another cause is that overpopulation means more waste, pollution, and overuse of cars.

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, in modern

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heavy traffic

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carbon emissions that cause air pollution

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more vehicles.

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, some people

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down trees,

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leads to reduce oxygen,

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carbon

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, and

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gases. In

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case, health problems will increase dramatically. The government and individuals can do a lot to solve these issues.

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, the government should encourage people to use public transport

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such

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as trains and buses

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order to reduce emissions and smog.

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, educate individuals

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plants are important to have quality air, by

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them

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plants in their houses.

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, recycling is a great way to protect

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nature.

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, in Oman

citizens

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are using paper bags and glasses

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of plastic ones.

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, both should take actions even

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is simple to make

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. In conclusion,

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environment

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challenge

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has

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become a debate issue in modern society.

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, if both individuals and

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take responsibility and work together by

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raising awareness

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and

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public

transportations

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transportation

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and recycling,

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problem can be effectively

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in the future.