The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years.

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provide

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the proportion of various devices used by adults in Canada to watch television over the

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decade between 2009 and 2019.

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,there was a clear shift from traditional TV to modern viewing methods. Conventional TV at the beginning dominated the chart

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reported the lowest figure,including

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digital

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such

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devices such

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as desktop

computer

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computers

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and

laptop

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laptops

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.

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demand reversed towards portable and internet-based devices among Canadian young viewers. In 2009,Conventional TV established itself as a dominant cohort with 34%

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however

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there was a dramatic fall to 4% in 2019. Desktop computers and laptops followed a similar pattern and constituted a noticeable proportion by

2009

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2009,

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with 18% and 20%, respectively.

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,preference of the young generation turned away from these platforms in 2019,identifying 6% and 8% diminish from previous marks.

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,flat screen compared with the initial year,the final figures reveal a remarkable transformation from 8% to 27%.Regarding

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mobile phones and

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tablets

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there is a noticeable

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to 26% and 19%. In conclusion,over the

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demand among Canadians reversed to internet-based technologies compared to traditional viewing platforms.