The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two given maps demonstrate the transformation of the Lynwich College in 2006 and
present
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day.
Overall
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, some trees were knocked down, and both recreational facilities and educational places
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such
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, such
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as cafeterias and
sports
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centres, were replaced and constructed. In 2006, the library was between the
sports
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field and the
car
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park
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,
then
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it was relocated to the southwest of the map.
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, it was rebuilt between college buildings 1 and 2. Various pavements have been
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now between the
cafeteria
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, bus stop,
sports
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centre and
car
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park
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. Bus stop, bike storage,
cafeteria
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and
sports
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centre were constrıcted. A
cafeteria
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was opened in the middle of the college. The bus stop was located above the
cafeteria
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,
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and next to the main road. The
car
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park
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was separated, and after that bike storage place was built
to
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on
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the right side of the
car
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park
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. The
sports
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centre was placed
on
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in
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the previous area of the library.
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, that area was extended, yet the
sports
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field zone has been reduced.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, car, park, cafeteria with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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