some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that if

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of whether

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it is better to encourage

childeren

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children

to be more competitive or to be more willing to

co-operate

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has been discussed for quite a long time. As for me, I think both views are correct

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we should have a mixture between them. The

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between

human

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has become more and more fierce with the development of science and technology,

from

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across

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all aspects of

the

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modern society.

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, almost all the jobs need more experienced

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than ever, which means that a

good paid

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job attracts lots of candidates and only

few

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a few

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of them will get the offer. So, a

sence

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sense

of

competition

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should be cultivated in childhood, which has been a trend in some

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,

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of

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lagging

off from the beginning.

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,

children

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are encouraged to win a prize in all kinds of games,

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as

paino

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piano

, running and

chessing

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chess

competitions.

Parents

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believe that if

children

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win

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competitions in their childhood, they are more likely to have a bright future.

On the other hand

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, some

parents

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view

cooperation

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as the most important skill

in

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for their children in

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the future

for their

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children

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.

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, when

children

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are playing soccer, teamwork is much more important for the team. No one would like a player who just shoots the ball himself. One of the

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is

as

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that as

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the work has

been

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become

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more and more complicated these years, it is hard for one person to

acheive

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achieve

success without teamwork. Many companies regard

cooperation

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as the first priority job skill for

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employee

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employees

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. So some

parents

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think it is better for

children

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to learn how to play with other

children

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to achieve a goal, not just

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. In my opinion, these two views are not contradictory

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meanwhile

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children

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can be taught both

competition

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and

cooperation

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. It is obvious that in the career field,

cooperation

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and eagerness

of finishing

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the job nicely are keys to success. A man

,

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who has a sense of

competition

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only,

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neglects

teamwork,

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and will

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not be able to work well in a company. An employee

,

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apply

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who

has

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no

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not

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willing to

compet

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compete

with others will probably not get a promotion chance in a big company. In conclusion, both views are correct

and

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parents

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should have a mixture of them in teaching

children

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, leading them to a successful future world.