The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.

The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how paper is made and recycled.
The diagram illustrates the process of
peper
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paper
making and recycling.
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, 4 steps are needed to transform trees
to
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into
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papers
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paper
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, and 7 steps will be undergone for
paper
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the paper
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to be recycled once they are made. To make
papers
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withs
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with
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plants, radiata pine
tree
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trees
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are chopped, and thinning will be done.
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, these raw materials will be sent to a de-barking drum for
further
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processing. After that, they will be sent to a chipper, followed by a thermomechanical refiner, where water is used. Once the step is done,
papers
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are produced.
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,
papers
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can be recycled. For those used for newsprint, they can be collected through a kerbside
.
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collection.
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After collecting them, they will be de-inked. To ensure quality, cleaning and fine screening will be conducted. The recycled
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papers
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paper
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is now in the form of pulp. After the pulp is mixed with water,
they
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it
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can be used as recycled paper again by using a paper-making machine to shape
them
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it
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words papers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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