The given bar chart illustrates the amount of money which is spent on retail goods (computers, cars, books, perfume, and
cameras
) in two countries, Use synonyms
France
and Great Britain Use synonyms
in
2010. The expenses are measured in pounds sterling.
Punctuation problem
, in
Overall
, the money spent more on cars by both countries Linking Words
Linking Words
while
Punctuation problem
, while
UK'sexpenditure
on perfume was deliberately less, Correct your spelling
expenditure
as well as
the Linking Words
spendings
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
of
Change preposition
on
cameras
in Use synonyms
France
in the given period. The significant difference in categories was in Use synonyms
cameras
among all.
In terms of cars, Use synonyms
while
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British
spent Check wording
Britain
exact
450.000, Replace the word
exactly
France
's expense was 400.000. Use synonyms
Similarly
, with Linking Words
huge
gap between countries, the expenditure Correct article usage
a huge
of
books Change preposition
on
together with
Linking Words
cameras
was nearly 400.000 and 350.000, Use synonyms
whereas
100.000 and double that amount Linking Words
is
spent Wrong verb form
was
fewer
by Correct word choice
apply
France
in 2010.
Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, Linking Words
for
perfumes Change preposition
apply
has
given a lot by Correct subject-verb agreement
have
second
country, 200.000 when Correct article usage
the second
United
Kingdom's costs were less than approximately 60.000, same as computers(350.000 Correct article usage
the United
on
Change preposition
in
UK
and around 400.000 Correct article usage
the UK
by
Change preposition
in
France
).Use synonyms