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The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.

The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate.
The map illustrates information about the present look of
the
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apply
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Huntingdon
town
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 and what improvements will happen
it
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in
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 the future.  
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
town
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 will
undergone
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undergo
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 radical transformations,
espacially
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especially
 in transport and
road
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 infrastructure.  In detail,
airfield
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the airfield
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in
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on
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 the north-west side of
the
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Huntingdon will
replaced
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be replaced
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 with industrial property, and
metro
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a metro
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 station will pass through from estate to
faciliate
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facilitate
 transportation.
In addition
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, what
stand
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stands
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 out is that roads will
enhanced
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be enhanced
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 in size and the Brampton
road
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 will
emerged
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emerge
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 with the A1.  
On the other hand
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, some things will
remained
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remain
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 constant
througout
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throughout
 the period,
such
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 as the area and facilities for residents and
a
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the
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 centre of the
town
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. Moving
further
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, between the Brampton
road
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 and the city centre
constructure
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construction
 of 
roundbound
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a roundabout is
 predicted to happen in the future.
Also
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, new tunnels will
added
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be added
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 to the Brampton
road
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 for
train
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the train
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 system,
while
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 the new
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road way
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roadway
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 will
built
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be built
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 to reduce forecasted traffic problems in Huntington
town
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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