In recent years, many countries have introduced laws to make public transport free of charge. Write the advantages and disadvanatages in your esasay.

Nowadays,
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the laws that were introduced in many
countries
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, public
transport
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has become
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free of charge. One main merit of
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tendency is its convenience.
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, as everyone could use public
transport
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for free, students who cannot afford the cost of
transportation
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,
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may not have troubles anymore.
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, many students who live far away from either their university or school need to go there by
transport
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.
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, it will be more convenient for them to go by public
transport
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without cost. If it were not for making it free, they could not afford
transport
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every day, so they would miss some lessons.
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, as students should not worry about
transportation
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any more, they can focus on their studies more carefully.
However
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, one main demerit of
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is for
country's
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a country's
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finance
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finances
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.
That is
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to say, to make public
transport
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free of charge,
countries
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' money should be allocated to
transportation
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.
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, every vehicle demands fuel to move, especially the driver, or it might break
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, as officials in many
countries
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put much money
to
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into
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transportation
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, other important factors like medicine and education might become underdeveloped. If it were not for investing
for
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in
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transportaton
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transportation
, there would be more improvements in those important factors.
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, as public
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had
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become free of charge in many
countries
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, it leads to economic problems. In conclusion,
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it will be convenient for people to use public
transport
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for free,
besides
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the economic problems, it will be pale in comparison.

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content
Add more ideas for both sides and give more clear facts to back them up.
structure
Use clearer links to make the flow from one idea to another.
grammar
Check grammar and spelling to be easy to read (for example, fix 'transportation' and keep simple forms).
structure
Make the ending stronger by showing what you think about free tickets for all.
content
The essay shows both sides of the issue.
structure
It uses 'However' and 'In conclusion' to show turn and end.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
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