The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how fabric is manufactured from bamboo. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration depicts the process of how
fiber
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was made from
bamboo
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. The 9-step how textiles are made begins with planting
bamboo
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in the spring and ends with the production of new products.
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is achieved by turning the plants into raw material that can be processed and
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turned into a range of outputs that contain
textile
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textiles
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. The method starts with planting
bamboo
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in the Spring, which can
then
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be harvested using special tools in the Autumn. Next up, they are
then
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cutting the
bamboo
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into strip shapes by using a material blade
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often used. When they are already in strip shapes, they can be crushed and processed to help make a liquid pulp. At step 5, we
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have to strain the results of crushing
bamboo
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to separate the long fibres from the liquid itself. Resulting
softer
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fibres by adding minerals and
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amine oxide.
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the product should be spun to make a yarn;
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,
weaving
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the yarn
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is woven to
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produce a textile
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apply
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that can be turned into clothes made from
fiber
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bamboo with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bamboo
  • fabric
  • cloth
  • fiber
  • yarn
  • thread
  • weave
  • knit
  • stages
  • steps
  • process
  • harvest
  • cut
  • crush
  • break
  • fiber
  • spin
  • weave
  • finish
  • wash
  • dye
  • color
  • soft
  • strong
  • material
  • final
  • make
  • from
  • to
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