The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980
The two maps show the changes made to
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Liverton Docks since 1980.
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, Liventon Docks has undergone a dramatic transformation from an industrial port full
ships
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of ships
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,
warehouse
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warehouses
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, and cranes into a modern residential and recreational area. Despite these major developments, the
river
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and its connection to the coast have remained unchanged. In 1980, there were a few cranes and warehouses on each
side
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of the
river
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. The
river
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was full of ships without any barriers. Following the renovations, only the
river
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reminds the same place, adding a new flood barrier and bringe in the end of the
river
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and includes the
river
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walk on one
side
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of the
river
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. On the one
side
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, demolishes education center and kind playground replaces with warehouse .
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, on the other
side
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of the
river
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, it constructs hotel and modern apartments. Notably, near to the apartments and
river
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, there is parking and reminds only one ship museum.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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