The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The map below shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The map illustrates the transformation of the village of Rye Mouth,
started
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apply
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from 1995 to
present
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the present
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that a
neumerous
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number of
changes have
been took
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taken
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place over the years, where Rye Mouth converted from
rural
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a rural
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area to an urban area. Beginning with the west, where a road has
extented
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extended
besides
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the housing and number of houses
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also
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has also
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increased.
Next,
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in the south, shops are converted into restaurants and
fish
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the fish
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marke
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market
is replaced by apartments.
At the end
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of the village,
besides
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the apartments or old fish market, there is a sea in
where
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which
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a fishing port has
estublished
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been established
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. Moving
forword
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forward
, to the opposite
of
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side of
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the new
resturant
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restaurant
and main road, there
is
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has
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still a hotel since 1995
but
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, but
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a car
parking
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park
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is
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has been
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added with it.
Furthermore
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, to the north-east, there was a farmland which
is
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was
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replaced by
golf
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a golf
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.
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course.
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In addition
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, end of the farmland, a forest park was found
but
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, but
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in
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at
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present
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present,
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the trees are chopped and a tennis court has been
estublished
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established
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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