Nowadays, more people travel abroad for tourism than ever before. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, international travel has grown rapidly
due to
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advances in transportation.
Although
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mass tourism can impose financial burdens, heighten exposure to infectious diseases, and harm the environment, its benefits—broadening horizons, alleviating stress, and providing governments with significant revenue—outweigh these drawbacks, making it a positive development for both individuals and countries.

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task response
Expand the map of ideas with 3-4 points and give one small fact or example.
coherence
Make a plan with four parts: intro, 2-3 idea parts, and end.
vocabulary
Use easy words, and short sentences.
content
Clear view that travel is good.
structure
Idea of both bad and good points is shown.
style
Reading is easy and flow is good.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general
Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural exchange
  • tolerance
  • understanding
  • economic benefits
  • job creation
  • revenue generation
  • environmental impact
  • over-tourism
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • social connections
  • global community
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