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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO₂) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line graph illustrates the changes in
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dioxide
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discharge
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 in different countries, the United Kingdom,
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal over the period from 1967 and 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
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dioxide
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 exudation
were
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 highly observed in the United Kingdom,
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 the lowest amount was recorded in Portugal. At the beginning of the period, the
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 had the highest figure , standing at approximately 11 metric
tonnes
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 in 1967.
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, Portugal recorded a much lower rate of
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discharge
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 of about 1 metric tonne in 1967. Meanwhile, the amount of
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dioxide
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 ejaculation in Italy and
Sweden
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 was 4.2 and 4.3 metric
tonnes
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. Over the next few years, the figures for
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, Italy and Portugal showed a sharp rise in
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 of
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dioxide
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 , reaching about 10.2,6.2 and 2.2 metric
tonnes
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 respectively in 1977.
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, there is a contrasting trend in the emission of
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dioxide
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 in the
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 in 1977. During the later years, there is an abrupt decline in
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dioxide
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 ejection in
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 between 1977 to 1987. On the opposite side, the percentage of
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dioxide
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discharge
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 changes slowly in the United Kingdom, Italy and Portugal.
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, the proportion of
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dioxide
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 in the
UK
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 ,
Sweden
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 , Italy and Portugal was 9.9, 6, 7.8 and 5.8 metric
tonnes
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 in 1997. By the end of the period, in 2007, the value of
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dioxide
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 transmission was highest in the
UK
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 among all the countries, approximately 8.4 metric
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.
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, the drastic changes were observed in
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,
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dioxide
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discharge
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 in the
UK
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 remained relatively stable.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, discharge, sweden, uk, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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