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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student'sperformance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree ?

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exam period
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perception
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the results in the
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the quiet and effort in the class by the student .
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certificates
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 the lesson and
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 the total. In order
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work only for marks and certificates.

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task response strength
Be clear: say if you agree or not in the first line of the intro.
coherence
Keep one idea in each paragraph and start with a short topic sentence.
task response
Give real and easy examples that fit the point and tie them to the idea.
grammar
Fix grammar and use short, plain sentences.
coherence
Use small linking words like and, but, also, so to show how ideas go from one to the next.
structure
Finish with a short end that restates your view.
content
The writer shows some view that exams are not the only measure.
structure
There is a conclusion that repeats the view.
content
Some numbers and examples are given.
Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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