Governments should make public transportation free in order to reduce the number of private vehicles on roads, therefore leading to lower carbon emissions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Oct 22, 2025

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Some attempt to discuss costs and how to help with transport.

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The idea to not make transport free but cheaper is clear.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

85 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

carbon emissions
private vehicles
public transportation
traffic congestion
greenhouse gas
urban areas
air quality
funding methods
environmental sustainability
infrastructure
commuters
viable option
demand for public transport

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