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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
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process
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the process
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 in given diagram demonstrates
ethanol
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fuel
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 production requiring corn.  Overview,
process
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the process
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 includes many different steps and ways to produce results of
ethanol
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fuel
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. The process is considered to be manmade, even though almost every product being used is a natural one.  The most essential ingredient
showen
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shown
 in the diagram is corn,which
gets
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is
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 done by many different methods
step
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after
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by
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step
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. Starting off by storing products,we
mile
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mill
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 and
furthermore
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 cook it for
specific
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a specific
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 time, 4 hours. During cooking time,some amount of water is added.
Longest
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step
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 of the diagram line is fermenting,lasting for
whole
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the whole
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 2 days.
Separating
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step
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 has 2 possible results
either
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 becoming liquid or solid by another type of product. After almost reaching
final
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the final
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 point,
ethanol
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 is
gettiog
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getting
 stored after a 5h purification period. Cycle ends with transportation of
ethanol
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fuel
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 to its delivery
sports
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spots
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, from where people order the
last
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 produced natural
fuel
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 themselves,or later by purchasing it from

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, fuel, step with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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