The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of the some tourist facilities

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of the some tourist facilities
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of the some tourist facilities
The two maps illustrate the changes on
Use synonyms
island
Correct article usage
the island
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in the field of
tourists
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tourist
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facilities.
Overall
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,
the
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apply
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iseland
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Iceland
changed dramatically from
empty
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an empty
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island
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into
modernised
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a modernised
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area and has become more
touristical
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touristy
. The buildings
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such
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, such
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as
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accommodations
accomodatios
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accomodatios,
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were introduced
and
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, and
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restaurant
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a restaurant
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was added. Looking at details, it can be seen that before constructing all those facilities for tourists
island
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had an empty look with only several trees. It had a special place for a beach and a big sea
which was
Verb problem
that
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surrounding
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surrounded
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it. After some time
island
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changed dramatically with some additional recreational places. The major
convert
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construction
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has been
construction
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apply
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of the
accomodations
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accommodations
at the
center
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centre
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of the
island
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and
at
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on
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the left side of the area.
In addition
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,
it
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apply
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was built a reception
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a reception was built
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on the
lefter
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left
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side of the
center
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centre
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,
while
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restaurant
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the restaurant
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was placed on top of the reception with a sea view.
some
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Some
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piers and boats were introduced
and
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, and
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beach
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the beach
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has become
swimming
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a swimming
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area

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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