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The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the populations of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.

The first table below shows changes in the total population of New York City from 1800 to 2000. The second and third tables show changes in the populations of the five districts of the city (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period.
The first table provides key information about the changes in the total percentages of New York
City
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 in the years ranging from 1800 to 2000. The units are measured in numbers. The second and third tables present the changes in the ratio of the five districts of the
city
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 (Manhattan, Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, Staten Island) over the same period. The units are measured in numbers and percentages.
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, it is clear from the graph that there were three different years
1800
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 ,1900, and 2000. In 1800, the population reached 79,2165 in New York
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. After that, in 1900, there was a sharp increase denizens arrived at 3,437,202. It is noticeable that in 2000, New York
City
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 residents climbed to 8,009,185.
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 what is shown in the second table in Manhattan, it has been seen that in
1900
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1900,
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citizens
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the population
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 reached 60,515, nearly 76%. In 1900, the population decreased and hit
1,850,093 approximately
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approximately 1,850,093
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 54%.
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 in 2000, the percentages reached 19% nearly 1,538,096 people. In terms of other districts (Brooklyn, Bronx, Queens, and Staten Island),the percentage in total in 1800 was 24% less than the 19,000 population. There was a sharp increase
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 1900 to 1,587,109, almost 46%. In 2000, touched 81%
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of
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 6,471,089 citizens.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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