The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.

The presented graph illustrates the process of how

coffee

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is manufactured from

beans

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for the consuming public.

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, the entire production process of

coffee

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involved

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both man-made and machinery components with

linear

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a linear

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style of

producing

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and

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it

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consists of eleven steps, commencing with picking the

coffee

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beans

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and culminating with packing into jars. Observing the diagram in detail, it is obvious that the process takes place once the

coffee

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beans

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are picked by human beings from

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.

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step is followed by drying them

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using sunlight. After drying the moistureless

beans

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,

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, the

coffee

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beans

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should cool rapidly. Before mixing with hot water, it is

grind

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with

a

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help of equipment. After the

coffee

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beans

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are added

hot

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to hot

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water,

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apply

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is separated the mixture

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the mixture is separated

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. Before the frozen liquid is crushed, the mixture should be frozen. Ultimately

having

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dried it in a vacuum to allow the water to drain, they are put into jars.