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The graph below shows the consumption and production of sugar in India from 2001 to 2011

The graph below shows the consumption and production of sugar in India from 2001 to 2011
The given line graph illustrates the amount of
sugar
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 that was produced and consumed by Indian citizens
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 over a decade, from 2001 to 2011. All details are given in tones.
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, it is evident that
although
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 some fluctuations, the production of
sugar
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 was the highest, whilst the consumption saw a slight increase throughout the period. Starting with
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 output, at the beginning of the
period
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period,
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 it recorded nearly 27
million
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tons
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,
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 decreased
respectively
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, respectively
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, making up just below 20
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tons
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.
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, it went up gradually from 17 to 34
million
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tons
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. In 2009, the
sugar
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 manufacturing displayed about 22
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, meanwhile
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at the end
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 of the period it demonstrated 31
million
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tons
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. Turning to
sugar
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 intake, the trend began with 22.5
million
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 tonnes.
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, in 2005, Indians consumed a little more
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 than in 2001, highlighting just under 25
million
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. From 2005 to 2011, the tendency grew respectively,
according to
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 27.5
million
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tons
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.

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