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The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These charts illustrate various data about a public Library in a city, which is called Little Child Chalfont.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the largest
number
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 of
loans
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 was in 2016,
while
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 the smallest
number
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 of
loans
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 was in 2007. The large proportion of members in 2006 was adult, and fiction stories were very popular among them during that period. The total
number
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 of
loans
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 in 2016 was more than in other years, at about 22,000.
However
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, the total
number
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 of
loans
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 in 2015, 2014, 2012, 2011, and 2010 was more than 20,000. It experienced less than
this
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 figure in 2007, 2008, 2009 and 2013.
Moreover
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, the largest proportion of members in 2016 was
adults
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 18-64, which was half of the population. Around 20% of them were
children
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.
In contrast
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, the percentage of young
adults
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 13-17 and
adults
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 65 and over was 15% and 12%, respectively.
Apart from
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this
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, the fiction was the most popular category, which was 38% in both
children
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 and
adults
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.
Additionally
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, adult non-fiction was in the second rank, at about 13%.
Furthermore
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, 6% of the category was
children
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's nonfiction,
whereas
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 adult audiobooks, young
adults
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, and
children
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's DVDs were less than 5%. All in all,
it is clear that
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 the total
number
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 of
loans
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 increased and reached about 22,000 in 2016.
Adults
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 between 18 and 46 were the largest group, and the fiction category was highly popular.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, loans, adults, children with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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