You have a problem with a neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: describe the problem say how long it has been a problem explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing
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letter to inform you that I am feeling really bothered by the parties and loud noises that are coming from your house every night.
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, I would like to make a formal request to solve
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matter. As I am a new mom, it is hard for me to sleep well at night because of the loud music and noises.
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, my 7-year-old daughter and 2-month-old son find it hard to fall asleep , which makes them restless and sick. We honestly do not mind if the noise lasts for 2 to 3 hours , but we hear it till 4 or 5 in the morning , which is now messing with our sleep cycle.
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we have been facing
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issue for the
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2 months, we thought that you would take notice and take the necessary steps. Unfortunately, it didn't happen, and it is getting hard for us to stay quiet. We do not want to take any legal actions, but it would be great if you could please keep the volume down , which could help my family to fall asleep peacefully. I would appreciate it if you could look into
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Yours sincerely, ABC

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structure
Keep two short parts in the letter: one about the problem and one about what you want. This helps the flow.
task response
Give a clear time when you want the noise to stop, for example 'Please keep the noise down after 9 pm.'
coherence
Try to make one idea in each paragraph. Put the problem in one paragraph and the request in another.
grammar
Check small grammar, like comma use and word order, to make the letter easy to read.
tone
Polite tone and correct start and end.
content
Clear problem and how long it has been an issue.
purpose
Clear call for action to keep noise down.
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