The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now.

The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the changes of the town named Shakefield from 1995 until now.
The given layouts highlight the evolution of Shakefield town since 1995, in a particular country.
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it is clear that
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lots of locations were eliminated, starting with farm land to seafood market, which opened room for golf course, car park, yachts and others during the period.
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, the remaining areas: house complexes, hotel, and coffee shop have stayed largely untouched, with only minor changes. In 1995, it was agricultural land on the top right map, whilst at the bottom it was a city park with many trees.
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, the housing complexes and sports venues were situated on the west of the map, with a
fish
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market, coffee shop and morning
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boats located near the sea. Since
then
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, Shakefield has undergone significant changes. The removal of farm land
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created space for golf and tennis courses.
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, holiday homes were built after destroying the public park near the hotel, which has been enlarged.
According to
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details, a restaurant and new apartments were built after the reconstruction of the morning
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boat and
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market
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meanwhile, the residential area was extended.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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