Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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get high salaries in their professional jobs. To be a more competitive person begins in

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by means of school education. From my perspective, I completely believe that

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competition plays a key role in boosting

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's creativity and expressing extra efforts to enhance their abilities.

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, when forcing them to express their best, families and teachers' wise monitoring is crucial to prevent overwhelming the

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. On one hand, human psychology is generally convenient to push

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to spark their imagination and effort.

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's minds and mental progress are definitely very prone to outperform.

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have more capacity to push their

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than adults.

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shows us that pushing limits is coded in our nature, and it's human behaviour. Parents have many responsibilities when explaining, encouraging and pushing their

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to express their best in school or in daily life

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schools have some responsibilities too.

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, to set and maintain an affordable level of rivalry between the students.

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, remember that all big breakthroughs

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flourished in a rivalry environment,

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, Edison and his light bulb invention.

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, some people argue that

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competitive environments are over-stressing students and harmful

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their health. In 2024, research held by Oxford University revealed that competition-sourced mental problems rose by %65 compared to the previous decade.

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survey clearly shows that

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pushing

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to develop their skills should be under the control of the school mental health branch.

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, its detrimental effects could be minimised or prevented. In conclusion, competitiveness is a solid truth of the modern era, and begins from

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environment , following and developing mainly in schools. It is vital for new breakthroughs

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should be under

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positive control.