Your friend recently moved to the same town where you live. Please write a letter to invite your friend to go to the gym together. In your letter o describe why you go to this gym o say what part of this gym you recommend o explain why you think it is suitable for your friend

Dear Rohini, I hope you are doing great! I am so happy to hear you've moved to my town. And, I would love to invite you to join me at my gym. I've been going to

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gym for about a year now because of its excellent facilities and friendly staff. Like most gyms, it has all the usual equipment, but you know what makes it different? Members get their own personal lockers for as long as they remain active.

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, the staff is very supportive

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when it comes to handling any unexpected situations. The part of the gym I'd really recommend you try is the Zumba session, which is incredible. The trainer is amazing, and the energetic music makes the class so much fun.

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, the batches are quite small, so the trainer can focus on each individual personally. I really think

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gymnasium would be perfect for you because it's in our neighbourhood and it will

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help you enhance your passion for Zumba. Let's plan to go together

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weekend, I'm sure you'll love it! Best regards, Smeeth

harneet76mlp

Oct 31, 2025

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Your letter has all parts: why you go to this gym, what you like best, and why it can fit your friend. You could add a short line that invites your friend to a specific time.

coherence and cohesion

To make flow clear, split big ideas into new sections. Start each new idea in a new line and use small links like 'also' or 'then' to join ideas.

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Clear goal to invite and a warm tone.

coherence and cohesion

Good choice of gym part to invite, the Zumba class.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

181 words

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