The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram shows a
step
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-by-
step
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process for producing
ethanol
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fuel from
corn
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.
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,
ethanol
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is produced through 8 main stages of different chemical and physical reactions and takes about 60
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from the first
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of storing
corn
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to the
last
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step
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of transporting it. First of all, to produce
ethanol
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from
corn
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, it is stored and
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milled
to
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into
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smaller particles. After
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it has to be cooked for 4
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with the addition of water. When
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process is finished, cooked
corn
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is
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fermented for 48
hours
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, which is the longest stage in the production cycle.
The next
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step
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is to separate the fermented product and to purify the
ethanol
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for another 5
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, which is the
last
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step
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.
This
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produces usable
ethanol
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fuel. The final 2 stages of
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diagram show that after the
ethanol
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is purified, it has to be stored and
then
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transported to the final location where it will be used or sold.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol, corn, hours, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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