The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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diagram shows the
process
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for producing
ethanol
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fuel from
corn
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. Generally, the production is done in a sequence of steps, starting from the collection and storage of
corn
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to the transportation of the purified
ethanol
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.
First,
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the storage of
corn
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takes place before it undergoes the milling
process
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, where it is
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into smaller pieces. It is here, during the next step of cooking, that water is added, which lasts for four hours.
Next,
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the cooked meal goes through fermentation, which takes 48 hours, in order for the conversion of sugars to take place into alcohol. The mixture is separated into liquid
ethanol
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and a solid by-product after the fermentation
process
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. It goes through a five-hour-long purification
process
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to come up with the pure
ethanol
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.
Finally
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, the purified
ethanol
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is stored once again before being transported to the intended destinations for use. To
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,
ethanol
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fuel production from
corn
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involves eight successive stages:
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from the
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storage of raw
corn
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all the way to
ethanol
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transportation. The
process
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both
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, both
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physically and
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chemically,
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entails different lengths of time for cooking and fermentation, followed by purification.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, ethanol, corn with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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