The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
The three maps illustrate the development of West Park Secondary
School
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between 1950 and 2010.
Overall
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, the
school
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site went through a significant transformation, with residential and agricultural areas being replaced by educational and parking facilities to accommodate the
school
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’s expansion. In 1950, the area to the west of the
school
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was occupied by houses and farmland,
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a playground was located to the east. By 1980, the houses had been replaced by a car park and a new science block next to the main
school
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building. Meanwhile, the farmland was converted into a sports field, providing students with a larger outdoor space for physical activities. By 2010,
further
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modifications took place. The car park was expanded significantly, occupying part of the former sports field, likely to meet the increased number of vehicles.
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, the sports field was relocated south of the science block, taking up part of the previous playground area,
while
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the remaining playground stayed in its original position to the east.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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