You want to join a part-time online course. Write a letter to the course administrator. In your letter: explain your education background ask for details about the course request information about fees and schedule

Dear Administration Officer, I am writing to request

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information about the part-time Genetic Counselling course advertised on your website. My name is Mandeep, and I recently completed my Master’s degree in Human Genetics. As I am passionate about pursuing a career as a genetic counsellor,

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course strongly interests me. At present, I am working full-time as a laboratory assistant at GCC Hospital, which means my schedule is quite fixed. Could you please clarify whether the classes are live or recorded, as I will need to plan my time

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, I would like to know whether the programme includes practical sessions or if it is entirely theoretical. I would

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appreciate it if you could provide details regarding the course fees and timetable.

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, your website states that payment must be made by credit card;

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a limit on mine, I would like to enquire if payment by debit card is possible. Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to your prompt response. Yours sincerely, Mandeep.

mandeepgurna9

Nov 3, 2025

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Coherence and cohesion: The text flows well. To help more, use small links like and, then, also to show how ideas go in order.

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Polite and formal tone.

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Clear ask for course details, fees, and rules.

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Shows your work life and fit with the course.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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7 paragraphs

171 words

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