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One of your penfriends wants to imporve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advice him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

Dear Aman, Hi, how're you?
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 been a
while
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 since we
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 communicated. Yesterday, I got your letter,
I
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and I
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came to know that you got your visa for Australia, and I am really happy for you. In
this
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 letter, you
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also
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are also
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 asking
advice for
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for advice
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how
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on how
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 to improve
english
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English
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befor
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before
 moving to Sydney. In case to improve to listening
skills
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, you should listen
the
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to the
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 podcasts with the
subtitiles
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subtitles
. Because
,
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this
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 thing
also
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 helps me to improve my
Ielts
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 listening module at the time of my exam, and I am sure it will
also
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 help you too.
In addition
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 to it, to enhance your communication
skills
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, you should follow the
you tube
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YouTube
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 channel with the name of "IELTS WITH ADVANTAGE".
This
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 channel will not be able to help you to speak fluent
english
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, but
also
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 make
proficient
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you proficient
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 enough to speak with
the
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apply
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better grammar
skills
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. Moving
further
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, to get a better command
on
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of
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 vocabulary. You should learn five words on a daily basis, and make 3 to 4 sentences on them. In
this
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. I hope
,
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 you
finds
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find
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this
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 letter
little
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a little
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 bit helpful in the case of
imroving
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improving
your
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apply
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all
the
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apply
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four
skills
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. See you soon, Harjeet Kaur.

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logical structure
Use a clear plan: start with a short hello, then body with three clear parts, and end with a friendly goodbye.
greeting and closing
Have a simple greeting and a closing line. Put Dear, a comma after the name, and sign your name.
single idea per paragraph
Put one main idea in each paragraph. If a paragraph has two ideas, split it to two.
complete response
Say why you write and then give the tip for each skill, and end with a kind closing.
suitable writing tone
Use calm and kind tone. Use simple words and fix big grammar errors to keep the tone good.
overall
The letter is warm and friendly.
content
It gives clear tips for listening, speaking, and vocabulary.
greeting and closing
The opening and closing are present.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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