Some people say that the main environmental issue of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some part of the population believes that the leading environmental

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currently is the extinction of certain

species

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of living beings and plants. Meanwhile, there are

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who say that ,nowadays, some more significant environmental problems exist.

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, I fully support the latest view and consider atmospheric

pollution

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to be a more serious threat.

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, now, humanity is actually facing an important problem of

loss

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of

species

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and the consequences that it brings about. One of the main reasons why

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problem exists is manufacturing. Obviously,

people

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need a lot of wood for manufacturing.

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, they tend to destroy forests that are the homes for lots of animals and various plants.

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, bison are used to eat the bark, so they need to live in a forest. In

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case, they are in danger of disappearance because their habitat is being

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each year.

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, bisons play a significant role in the forest's life. They create a new area, where new plants can grow and which becomes a home for lizards, insects and other living beings.

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,

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should pay more attention to the

loss

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of particular

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. Because even one

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could bring others in the short term. To my knowledge, there are more important problems about the environment,

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as

air

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pollution

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.

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, the quality of London's

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has decreased significantly over the

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15 years.

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, the

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in London has been getting worse and worse each year because of the excessive number of cars.

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, if you live there for a long time, you are likely to face some health issues, lung diseases

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. So,

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environmental

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already contributes to many maladies among residents of

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city, unlike the

loss

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of

species

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. And it directly affects humans, unlike the

loss

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of

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. So,

people

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should be more worried about their health. Comparing these views, I am prone to think that

air

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pollution

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is a far greater priority than the

loss

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of biodiversity.

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issue

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affects humans in a direct way. It reduces

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's health and

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quality of life.

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, I had been struggling with

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issue

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before I moved to the area with just a few cars and a forest nearby. I've done it because the place where I used to live had severely polluted

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, and I couldn't breathe normally without being tired. Moving to a new area resulted in a noticeable improvement in my well-being. So,

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decision, I realised how frightening

air

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pollution

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actually is. In conclusion, surely, the

loss

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of biodiversity would cause some challenges in the long term.

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, I advise the population to be more concerned about the rapidly polluted atmosphere because it affects

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the population's well-being. It causes thousands of deaths annually.