The chart below shows the proportion of profits made from the seven most viewed movies

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of profits produced by seven popular movie genres in the USA in 1995, 2000 and 2025.

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, comedy and drama contributed the most to all years,

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genres like thriller and musicals earned the least.

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, action films were losing popularity over time

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animation showed the opposite trend. Over time, the popularity of adventure genres rose to around 23% at the

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2005 after a sudden 5% drop in 2000.

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, comedy and animation showed a steady upward trend from 20% to about 27% , which is one quarter of the total proportion and from around 3% to 7%

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drama produced around 27% profits in the

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1999

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1999,

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action produced around 17% both showed a downward trend in the

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2005, which was losing popularity over time.

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, benefits from thriller and musical films fluctuated in 2000 and

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remained less than 5% in the

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2005.

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