You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. \ Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

Dear

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, I hope you are doing well. As I promised

you

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you,

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I will write a letter to you when

i

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I

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reached

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on

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the destination which you recommended

me

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to me

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on my vacation.

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is the best option to spend my holiday in

Bruce

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the Bruce

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peninsula

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Peninsula

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, Ontario. The area is so pleasant and

weather

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the weather

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is so beautiful.

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my first day, I

already

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had already

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booked the hotel

prior

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online prior

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by

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to

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online

reservation

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arrival

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. The hotel room looks very decorative . I can see beautiful views in every direction- inside and outside.

Staff

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The staff

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is so friendly. Here I get the experience of hiking and fishing with

the

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friends

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friends,

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that

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is very enjoyable. Next day , we have a plan to visit flowerport island, Cyprus lake and Bruce peninsula national park but unfortunately for the national park we have to booking the ticket before two weeks that's we can't explore that place but we decided to go tobermory on the moment where we did river rafting, ride on cruise which covers two three islands there I feel the beauty of the nature. Before

,

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apply

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to come

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coming

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back to Toronto, we saw the

sambal beach

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Sambal Beach

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and enjoyed the

meal

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sushi, prone tacos.

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trip is so nice

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, thankew

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thankew

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thanks

to your recommendation. Next time

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, if

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I have

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a holiday

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holiday

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holiday,

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I will confirm

give

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and give

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me good recommendations. Your sincerely Shabnam