You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent, you have had a wonderful time. You have promised to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion. \ Write a letter to your travel agent as promised, and let him know what you have been doing and what you are going to do before the end of the journey.

Dear Mr Singh, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to give my feedback

for

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the place that recommended by you

for

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recommended for

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my current

holiday

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holiday,

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promised

with

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apply

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you. As you mentioned, during my travel plan booking that it will include the airport pick-up, and accommodation for all

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4 days. It happened

same

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, that was really a commendable factor.

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this

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, upon

arrival

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they

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served me dinner for free of cost. Moving

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, currently, I am exploring the local markets of Chandigarh, and

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already

taste

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the famous dish

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Rajma- Rice.

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was really good in taste.

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to it, I am

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going to explore

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apply

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sector

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Sector

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, that

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that

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which

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is famous with the name of "Shopper's

paradis

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Paradise

within

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2 to 3 hours. Before the end of

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journey, I will be

explore

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the 'Elante Mall", because

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one of the famous malls in the whole

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of chandigarh

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chandigarh

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Chandigarh

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, and

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consists

all

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of all

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the shops

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one place. I hope you will find

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information useful for your upcoming tourists, and

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also

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want to book my next tourist destination

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your suggestion. Yours sincerely, Harjeet Kaur.

hk356645

Nov 6, 2025

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grammar

Check grammar and punctuation in each sentence. Use 'I have enjoyed' or 'I am enjoying' to talk about now; fix 'that recommended by you' to 'that you recommended'.

coherence

Break long sentences into shorter ones; make one idea per sentence and add paragraph breaks.

tense

Keep tense consistent; use past for what you did, and near future for what you will do.

spelling and punctuation

Polish spelling and capitalization: Chandigarh, Shopper's Paradise, Elante Mall.

tone

Polite tone with a courteous greeting and closing.

content

Gives clear details of what was done and what will be done.

content

Mentions specific places and foods, showing real travel detail.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

travel
agent
holiday
place
time
wonderful
great
nice
good
visit
see
go
do
eat
try
walk
boat
beach
market
food
people
local
guide
tour
plan
will
going
soon
end
journey
return
write
thank
thanks
appreciate
help
tips
weather
sunny
warm
calm
photos
postcard
gift
souvenir
yours sincerely
best regards

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