The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.

The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the numbers of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in three years and compaire with European everages.
The bar chart compares the number of vehicles per one thousand people in five European
countries
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in 2005, 2009, and 2015, alongside the European average.
Overall
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, vehicle ownership increased in most
countries
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over the period, with
country
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5 consistently recording the highest figures and
country
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1 the lowest.
Country
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4,
in contrast
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, showed little change across the three years. In 2015,
country
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5 reached nearly 1,000 vehicles per 1,000 people, well above the European average of just under 800.
Country
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3, at around 700, was closest to the average,
while
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country
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1 remained significantly lower. In 2009,
countries
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2, 3, and 4 reported figures close to the average (approximately 500, 600, and 700
respectively
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, respectively
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).
Country
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1,
however
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, lagged behind with only 400 vehicles,
whereas
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country
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5 stood out with more than 800. In 2005, the average was 700, matching the figures for
countries
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3 and 4.
Country
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1 recorded only half that amount, highlighting a substantial disparity compared to the others.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Stability
  • Significant
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Average
  • Comparison
  • Fluctuations
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Dip
  • Outperform
  • Lag behind
  • Demographic factors
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Mobility demand
  • Environmental concerns
  • Policy implications
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