The two tables below show the number of international students from different resource countries in Canada and the USA in two school years.

The two tables below show the number of international students from different resource countries in Canada and the USA in two school years.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two tables below show the number of international students from different resource countries in Canada and the USA in two school years.
The tables compare the data on the proportion of foreign
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in Canada and the United States from three countries during two school years between 2002 and 2004.
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the total number of international learners in the USA far exceeded that of Canada, there was a significant increase in the figures of Canadian international
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during the second school year.
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with, in 2002-2003, Canadian schools accepted
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from China, India and the United States, each at 5400, 5000 and 2100, respectively. In the subsequent academic year, the Chinese
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constituted the largest proportion of foreign
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at 7850, which accounted for a 45%
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, comprising 2835
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, demonstrated a 35% rise
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only 9% new American
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got enrolled in 2003-2004.
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, in the USA, from a massive figure of 200,000 Indian international
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in 2002-2003, a 9% decline was recorded in the next
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year
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, Chinese and Canadian
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raised marginally to 6% and 7%, respectively, during 2003-2004. In conclusion,
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Canada recorded an upward trend in the total percentage by 17%, a declining trend was noted in the USA during 2003-2004.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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