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Writing Samples
Band 4

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the future, nobody will buy printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this
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 statement
.
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 In the future, nobody will buy printed
newspapers
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 and
books
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 because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. I support
this
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 statement largely. My opinion will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs. Online reading has become very popular nowadays
due to
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 its comfort and availability. People can read them in the form of PDF anywhere from their comfort
by
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zone by
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 taking subscriptions.
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, reading9.com people get
lot
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a lot
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 of benefit through
this
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 type of learning platform and analyse their mistakes and improve their reading.
More
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 over online study materials are very cheap as compared to printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 because it does not require any physical paper to print. and help
public
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the public
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to
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save their money. In
this
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 method of reading,
prevention
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the prevention
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 of plants
are
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is
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 possible
which
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, which
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 in turn
require
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requires
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 more plants for
production
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the production
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 of
papers
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paper
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.
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,
to produce
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 one tonne
paper
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of paper
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 requires a huge amount of trees to
cut
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be cut
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 down
which
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, which
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 leads to deforestation.
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in
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 addition to
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that,
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 printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 are costlier. Availability is one of the other factors. If someone
,
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apply
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ordering
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orders
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 it online will take some time to reach.
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, people still like to read printed
books
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due to
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 poor internet access and lack of trust
on
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in
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 online
platform
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platforms
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,because numerous websites
spreading
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spread
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 misinformation
and
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, and
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 to prevent themselves from being
victim
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victims
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 of those sites. In conclusion, despite having some disadvantages
online
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, online
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 reading is very affordable and comfortable as compared to printed
one
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ones
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due
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. due
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 to many factors in future
there
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, there
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 is a disappearance of printed
books
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 and
newspapers
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 .

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task response
Plan your essay with a clear line: opening that says your view, 2 or 3 body ideas with one point per paragraph, and a short closing that restates your view.
coherence
Use simple, straight words. Keep to one idea in each paragraph and add linking words to move from one idea to the next.
coherence
Give a specific example for each point and explain how it backs your view. Do not go off topic.
content
The writer gives a clear view from the start and ends with a final line.
content
There are ideas on cost and eco help that back the view.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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