The graph below shows the percentage of the labor force employed in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of the labor force employed in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the percentage of the labor force employed in the USA between 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the
labor
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labour
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force employed in different sectors in
USA
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the USA
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from 1930 to 2010.
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, farming, fishing and forestry
was
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the primary
source
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sources
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of employment in 1930.
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, by
2010
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2010,
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the number had declined sharply.
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, sales and office, industrial, technical and other services altogether showed a considerable jump by
2010
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the end of the period shown. In the beginning, the agriculture sector had the largest number of employees with 70% of the US workforce
but
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declined sharply from the 1070s onwards, dropping to below 10% by 2010. In the same year, agriculture dropped sharply to less than 5%.
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, the industrial sector increased from the
1970s
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peaked at approximately 40% around
1990
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1990,
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before plateauing.
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, these figures dropped again in 1960 to less than 10%, fluctuating until
it
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maintained a stable increase by 2010.
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, there was a steady increase
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labour force employment in the technical sector
reaching
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about 30% in the year 2010. Other services peaked mid-century and
then
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stabilized
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at roughly 10-15%
at the end
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