The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000
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illustrate
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the production amount of the 3 most prevalent
kind
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kinds
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of fuel in the UK from 1982 to 2000.
Overall
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, it can be inferred that the most produced fuel is
petroleum
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petroleum,
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follow
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followed
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by coal and natural
gas
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.
However
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, the manufacture of natural
gas
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had changed after 9
years
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and surpassed coal. With regards to the amount of petroleum that had been produced, it began from roughly 90
units
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and gradually increased to 140
units
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in the next 5
years
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. After
that
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that,
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it experienced a fluctuation in the few
years
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after, but
rise
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rose
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back to
more
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apply
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approximately 150 in the year 2000.
Likewise
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, coal
also
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experienced fluctuations throughout the
years
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with
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, with
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the most dramatic drop
down
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to 35
units
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in 1983
, it
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. It
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had a slight increase
fter
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after
that
but
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, but
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soon followed by a
down
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downward
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trend.
In contrast
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, natural
gas
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had almost no transformation in the first 9
years
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of the period, but since
1991
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1991,
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afterwards
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afterward
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afterward,
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there was an
up
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upward
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trend ,which made natural
gas
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became
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become
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the second highest at 100
units
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in
trhe
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the
year 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gas, years, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • overall decline
  • depletion
  • shift in energy policies
  • global oil prices
  • extraction technology
  • cleaner energy sources
  • technological advancements
  • investment in nuclear energy
  • diversification
  • traditional fossil fuels
  • sustainable options
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