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The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » »
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The diagram illustrates the global market share of the electronic devices market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006
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, all tend to have a distinct trend in the years 2005 and 2006. Nokia holds the most shares in both years and has increased in 2006,
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most of them decreased in the year 2006. On the one hand, Nokia in 2005
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had a 32.5% share ,
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in 2006, it slightly increased to 35%.
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, Motorola shares increased by a big amount in 2005, with 17.7% reaching the 2nd highest with 21.1%.
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, Samsung's shares decreased from 12.7% in 2005 to 11.8% in 2006. Sony Ericsson
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the other hand, gained from being
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6.3% in 2005 to 7.4% in 2006.
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L.G share dropped to 6.3% in 2006. BenQ Mobile was the lowest globally in 2005, with 4.9% to 2.4% in 2006. The Other Company held a good spot in 2005, with 19.2% but
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eventually decayed in 2006 to 16.2%.

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