The table and chairs below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018, in one area of Britain. The table shows that's where the money came from and it's also how it was distributed.

The table and chairs below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018, in one area of Britain. The table shows that's where the money came from and it's also how it was distributed.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table and chairs below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018, in one area of Britain. The table shows that's where the money came from and it's also how it was distributed.
The Table provides information about the
police
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budget, in millions, allocation for 2017 and 2018 across three sections,
along with
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pie charts that illustrate the distribution of money between them.
Overall
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, it can be observed that there is a slight increase in the budget for 2018, mostly for local taxes,
whereas
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the
technology
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has the lowest among them in both years. Taking a closer look, in 2017, the
police
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had around 305 million in total, where the national government took three quarters, approximately 175 M,
while
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the
technology
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had only 8%, equivalent to 38M. Regarding 2018, the
police
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spent more money, going from 305 to 319M. As far as buildings and transportation, it remained consistent at 17
percent
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per cent
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,
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. In
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in contrast
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, there was a rise in the money used on
technology
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, recahing 14%, 6% increase from the previous year. The pattern suggests that
technology
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has become an important part
for
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of
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the
police
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, technology with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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