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In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why do you think this is? What are the possible consequences?

In
this
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 day and age,
environment
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environmental
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problem
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problems
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becomes
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have become
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 a
heated-topic
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heated topic
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and
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, and
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 it is suggested to put more effort
on
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into
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 recycling
of
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apply
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our
rubbish
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 so that it can softly improve the
situations
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situation
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.
In nowadays
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Nowadays
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, Hong Kong is facing the land
problem
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due to
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 the
landfill
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landfills
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is
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apply
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cover more than
almost
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apply
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70% of
hosehold
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household
rubbish
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 and
the industry
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industrial
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waste
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wastes
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wastes,
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whch
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which
 are causing different issues
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for
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, for
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example
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example,
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 air and visual pollution or even the quality of living.
However
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, the phenomenon of the
recycle
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recycling
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 rate is not
increase
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increasing
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 rapidly
and
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, and
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 in
this
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essay
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essay,
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 it will
dicuss
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discuss
 the reasons First of all, the action of
recycle
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recycling
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requried
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requires
 complex steps
so
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, so
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people
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 might
tired
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get tired
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on
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of
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follwing
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following
 the rules. There is no denying that humans created a host of household
rubbish
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such
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 as some
plastice
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plastic
bottle
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bottles
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, one-way containers and
everday
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everyday
 newspaper.
Although
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 those
itmes
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items
 can be thrown in the recycling
rubbish
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 bins, they
new
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are new
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 to
seperate
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separating
 into different boxes and
clean
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cleaning
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 all the materials
berfore
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before
 they throw
away
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them away
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.
As a result
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,
people
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 might think that recycling is a complex task and it
make
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makes
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 their
lifes
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lives
become inconvience
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inconvenient
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.
Therefore
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, some might merely
throwthe
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throw the
trashes
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trash
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on
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in
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 the
pubblic
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public
rubbish
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 bins
instead
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 of the recycling boxes.
Next,
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in
term
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terms
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 of social aspect, without a doubt , the government does not provide the policies to restrict the citizens
to recycle
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from recycling
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. Since
people
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 are more willing to follow the rules, setting
the
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apply
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a law to encourage the public to
notice on
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pay attention to
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 the recycling action. If the government request the public to buy the garbage bags from
thoes
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those
 companies,
public
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the public
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 will try to recycle
plactice
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plastic
,
perper
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paper
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, cans.
Also
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, the government can provide some tools to raise the awareness of recycling trash in
the
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apply
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sociaity
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society
.
For example
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, if
people
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 can reach the amount on the
recycle
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recycling
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 rate , they can get some
dicount
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discount
 on consuming in some shops and
therefre
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therefore
, it can trigger
people
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 to recycle more.
To sum up
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, more
environment
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environmental
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problem
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problems
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 may
cause
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be caused
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 by the
reducing
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reduction
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 of recycling
rubbish
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 in the future
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such
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, such
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 as acute
gobal
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global
 warming and land
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problem
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problems
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 in the coming decades.
As a result
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, all
the
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apply
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people
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 need to take
their
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apply
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responsiability
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responsibility
 to protect the earth
in
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by
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 recycling
the
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apply
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rubbish
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.

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planning
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structure
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organization
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coherence
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language
Check spellings and word form. Use common words only.
content
Some ideas about why people do not recycle are shown.
structure
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Your opinion

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